Jul. 13th, 2006 02:45 pm
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Another in the series of "articles" I like to call "WTF, Witchvox?".

http://www.witchvox.com/va/dt_va.html?a=uspa&c=words&id=10897

She forgot to tell us the actual results of her die rolls - she must be a free-form online witch, and not a traditional table-top one.

Seriously - what the fuck was the point of this? This is as bad as the kids I knew in high school telling me about what they did with ghosts when they'd get high in the cemetary, or that they summoned demons and "other shit".

She should have signed that piece of crap "Mary Sue".

Date: 2006-07-13 07:00 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] felinaeus.livejournal.com
*snerks and agrees*
fun reading, though. Makes for a good plot to a movie-of-the-week thing on TV. Has all the right elements:
-Powerful leader who has a weakness(doesn't remember crap)
-Groupies
-Skeptic
-Uber-powerful baddies
-mystery to be solved
-A 'Missing Link' in the events (see previous point)

but for writing it in the first person, I give it a failing grade.
One day you’ll walk the world
and keep in mind
The heart you’ve been given
in winter time
And through the bitter cold,
with opened eyes
You’ll find the strength to fight
and stand upright